
For a start, the background is a little plain. I thought it would look like a professional promo shoot if the background was plain white however it just makes the images feel really flat and is rather too plain to fit in with the rest of the project or with the conventions of the psychedelic genre. I use a number of Jack heads, increasing in size, to line the right side of Jack. The inclusion of the image of him with a guitar is to promote him as an artist but also display his musical ability - his marketability not being in his physical style or 'coolness' but in his musical ability, that being what he wants to be judged on. As you can see, I included a yellow border like in the Motley Crue ad that I looked at, the white area at the bottom was likely going to be an area filled with comments and a star-rating but I do not feel this design is as good as it can be.
For a start I would like more room at the top for Elsewhere Head to go and maybe some more text, like a heading.
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